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A shadow, a ghost,
form hidden within layers
of aging fabric.

A city doorway is all
the shelter she can hope for.

Expensive NicetiesExpensive Niceties

Let’s spend all we have
‘Cause pain is so expensive
Do we have enough cash?

1.Social phobia;
n. My efforts drowning as
I smile in a cage.

Winter Left MeThe sounds of laughter,
And the four strong cooled spring winds,
Are drifting through me
Like a hollow conch that sings
Of winter's abandonment.

RageI'd like to punch her.
Make the empty words stop. I'm
crazy am I not?

Haiku #3Spring’s downpour beckons,
Promising chasm instantly
Abstracted and bare

Why I like HaikusFinite words to use.
Such limitations can cause.
Infinite Beauty.

Sunset's lovely redI see that red hue
Floating towards the twilight sky
On a cold sunset

False SubtletiesLipstick hangs like blood
on her lips - she smiles, eyes dance
behind masked exterior
of decaying skin
that droops the edges of her
eyes like secret masquerade.

Have at meKick me while I'm down
I'll laugh and spit blood at you
A fair trade I say

ObsessionPreoccupation

Compulsive, irrational

Excessive nature.

IdealSueños,
Constelaciones del subconsciente
No es necesario un telescopio

ReflectionAcrid misery,
It’s just people killing all
There is no virus

(We are)

A Haiku on HumanityJust like the flowers
Bloom and die, so does the love
Humanity gives.

HumanidadHumanidad,
El verdadero cancer
de la actualidad

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So Much MoreYou looked at me and
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by ~ricken4003, Sep 20, 2012, 7:24:03 PM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Haiku & Eastern

You looked at me and
you saw a pixel. You have
missed the masterpiece.

So Much Moreby ~ricken4003

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Haiku & Eastern

©2012-2013 ~ricken4003

I'm as guilty of this as anyone, snap judgments are human nature.

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*Hfeather53 Sep 23, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

<3this

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~ricken4003 Sep 23, 2012

Thanks, and thanks for the

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My pleasure.

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ha ha this is amazing!

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Wow, thanks!

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~CutToTheSex Sep 20, 2012

Well said.

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Thanks!

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This is genius.

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Wow, thanks!

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